Lost

[Jenna]

Okay so here's a new poem I wrote. I hope you guys like it.

Lost in my mind.
I can't find,
the way out of this prison-chained Hell,
but it's also a place where I want to dwell.
Happiness and friends it provides though it seems dumb
It keeps me happy while leaving me numb.
Everywhere I roam.
Everywhere the roam.
Leaving a cloud of dust,
blocking my senses til they rust.

It's very short lol. If you do poetry I would love some feedback. :) Thanks for reading.

[Jenna]

@ Jules thanks for the comment it really means a lot. I'm glad you liked it. :) also you should do poetry again, I'm sure it is good and it's really one of the best ways to express yourself.

[Jules]

Thats great Jenna! (: I love poetry and I believe there are no rules when it comes to expressing yourself. If you're happy with what you've written and it means something to you...its a good poem in my book! Keep writing. It encourages me to get back into it. Thanks. xo