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Empty Void-New Poem

Once pleasant smiles,
turn in to melancholy frowns.
Bound by the chain of thee's
inner world collapsing.
Just a fantasy,
to fill the void,
of her black-tainted heart.
Loneliness creeps over her,
the Devil's finest work.
Putting in thoughts
she can't stop.
By making her wish
for the impossible,
while ripping her heart out,
leaving a hole
of emptiness and despair.

I wrote this one is about 5 mins. I hope you liked it. Also sorry for the crappy ending.

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Comment by Emily on January 29, 2012 at 4:07pm: Awesome. Describes what it's like perfectly, for me at least :)

Comment by Jenna on January 29, 2012 at 3:06pm: @Aine Yeah the first line just popped in my head, and then I just wrote from there. I know and thanks. :)

Comment by Aine on January 29, 2012 at 2:55pm: It seems to come from deep in your heart, thanks for sharing. You are not alone, though we share your journey.