Okay so I haven't written any poetry in a while about MD so I figured I would today.

Daydream away

listen to what the voices say.

"Dream more,little girl,

of diamonds and white pearls.

Don't leave this place.

I can see it in your face,

you want to stay

here all day."

I run from them

as they dim

my senses of real life.

Addicted like self-harmers and their knifes.

I'm not crazy.

Just stuck through a hazy

thing I call daydreaming.

Anyways, I know it is not my best, but I'm trying to rhyme in my poems now, so sorry for the poor word choice. Thanks for reading and feedback would be great. Have a nice day :)..... or night I really have no clue where you are. Oh wait or afternoon...or dawn. Oh wait I'm just writing everything I'm thinking. Oh darn I did it again. XD Sorry.

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Comment by Jenna on February 23, 2012 at 3:48am
Thanks.
Comment by varghese e david on February 23, 2012 at 1:27am

really a good one!

Comment by Jules on February 19, 2012 at 7:42pm

Go Jenna! I like it. (:

Comment by Jenna on February 19, 2012 at 7:42pm
Thanks :) *blushing*
Roger, I know I am mad. (Shh! You are going to ruin our serect)
(aww who cares, they will just kick me out because I'm a ba influence on the others)

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