Poems

[Jenna]

Whispers from the wispy fountains,

lieing forever with the youth fountain.

Dreaming of a different world.

It's quite absurd,

to spend my time,

filling a poem with rhymes

about dreams.

Because my mind is not what it seems.

It's filled with characters

pushing between barriers,

of fantasy and real.

During the day I find myself once again, reeled

into a daydream,which I can't run this field,

of golden daffodils and shimmering apples, the color of a rose.

I remember the day I got a dose,

of this place.

Now real life is a daze,

compared to my mind.

The place where I find

myself wanting and crying

to escape in to both places.

So I end my wish sighing

and try to figure out where I am in these races

of daydreaming and life.

Haha I'm not sure what to call these. Anyways, I hope you guys like them and helpful criteria is helpful. XD I seem to have these two rhyming schemes I just seem to love using.  Anything rhyming with places and dreams. XD 

[Jenna]

*bulshing* Thank you.

[Aine]

Aww that was sweet. I like it and want you to keep writing