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Hey everyone. I thought I would share another poem I wrote about MD. It is called invisible world. I hope you like it. Close your eyes drift and glideto a place unseen.A place between the heart and m…

Hey everyone. I thought I would share another poem I wrote about MD. It is called invisible world. I hope you like it.

Close your eyes drift and glide
to a place unseen.
A place between the heart and mind.
A spiritual,comfort place.
Chained around with the pain and sorrow.
Where the demons taunt
and the angels sing.
The mind explodes with creativity and imagination.
While the song birds sing the song of heart-broken people.
One question they hum.
A curse or a gift.
In the world unseen.

In this poem I didn't exactly choose whether or not it is a cruse or gift, but tried to cover both. I think this is one of my best poems. Now for all you poets out there I would love some advice on my poetry. Ohh, by the way I'm planning to write a short story of one my MD's soon. It will no the full story, but a small exert of it. I will try to post it on here. I'm not sure when, but I will be starting the story soon most likely.

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Comment by varghese e david on January 9, 2012 at 7:10pm: the day one:

there wasn't a tree and Birds....

and the wind too

It wasn't barren at all

second Day:(it might be after a several days,still for the plot)

A bird was flying through

left a weed,that sprout the week after

plant grown into a tree

there were birds of kind

they sung,wind came.....

third day:(after thousands of days)

there is a forest now

full of indigenous trees,

spring..and wind......

grow my comrade with creativity at the fullest!!!!

all the best!

Comment by Jenna on January 6, 2012 at 12:46pm: Yeah I know. I consider this my best piece so far. I've decided to change the way I write poetry some. I'm glad you like it. Thank you.

Comment by Jenna on January 5, 2012 at 5:16pm: Thank you I'm glad you like it.

Comment by roxanne on January 5, 2012 at 5:08pm: I particularly relate to "a place between the heart and mind." That is so true; it's neither & both.

"A spiritual comfort place" - like comfort food for the soul.

Good work. I'm not a poet, so I can't offer constructive critiques, but I love poetry, especially when it puts a feeling I already have into words.