Comments - Unfinished Short Story From My DD - Wild Minds network2024-03-28T10:49:15Zhttps://wildminds.ning.com/profiles/comment/feed?attachedTo=4661400%3ABlogPost%3A200134&xn_auth=nolol thanks Bee! I've actually…tag:wildminds.ning.com,2015-11-07:4661400:Comment:2178792015-11-07T03:48:47.423ZRichard Questhttps://wildminds.ning.com/profile/RichardQuest
<p>lol thanks Bee! I've actually wrote a lot more to the story... I just haven't put it up yet. I don't actually know how long it's going to be in the end.</p>
<p>lol thanks Bee! I've actually wrote a lot more to the story... I just haven't put it up yet. I don't actually know how long it's going to be in the end.</p> You have to finish this - I h…tag:wildminds.ning.com,2015-11-07:4661400:Comment:2180272015-11-07T00:29:13.247ZBeehttps://wildminds.ning.com/profile/Bee
<p>You have to finish this - I have to know more! Interesting setting and the city "breaths". Your dialogue really flows - sounds natural and I like George. ;-)</p>
<p>This is a winner!</p>
<p>You have to finish this - I have to know more! Interesting setting and the city "breaths". Your dialogue really flows - sounds natural and I like George. ;-)</p>
<p>This is a winner!</p> Thanks! I've never shared my…tag:wildminds.ning.com,2015-01-29:4661400:Comment:2002372015-01-29T00:40:29.602ZRichard Questhttps://wildminds.ning.com/profile/RichardQuest
<p>Thanks! I've never shared my work other than my drawings on here! </p>
<p>I kind of write these short stories to connect them later in one long saga with all the explanation in the first section xD This might be taking place three or four books after my universe starts though so explanation wasn't really my goal. The whole thing that starts off my universe is a biological terror attack on the world as we know it today, with the "disease" killing off everyone who has passed puberty, and…</p>
<p>Thanks! I've never shared my work other than my drawings on here! </p>
<p>I kind of write these short stories to connect them later in one long saga with all the explanation in the first section xD This might be taking place three or four books after my universe starts though so explanation wasn't really my goal. The whole thing that starts off my universe is a biological terror attack on the world as we know it today, with the "disease" killing off everyone who has passed puberty, and rendering the survivors "biologically immortal" due to an effect of the drug on their DNA. So basically young forever, until they get killed in war etc...</p>
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<p>I hope that clears that up xD</p>
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<p>And what you said about my dialogue, that's a good idea! I've been trying to get different dialects down for each city, but I'm not a linguistic person xD What I thought was because they were immortal, language doesn't evolve as fast like now with new speakers every generation or so; therefore making language something that is pretty much stationary. (Even though I've been working on a new language for the evil nation to speak).</p>