Haha, just a couple things I wrote when I was feeling down. They're pretty short and not that great.

#1:

No matter where
When I wake up I reach out for you
And you disappear
Into the oblivion
Why do you do this to me?
It’s been going on since I was a child
I’ve been waiting, pondering, wanting for you to stay through the day. By my side through the seasons and the years.

#2:

The dark. The sweat and the night. The presence sucks things in.
Years pass. The dark and its bittersweet lips of the presence continue to taunt me.
All the things that were ever mine, glistening in the soft light of the beach in the sun, brought in by the waves.
Are swept away by the presence.

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Comment by roxanne on February 11, 2012 at 8:30pm

I do hope you write more.  

Comment by Dusty on January 22, 2012 at 8:17am

Thanks for the kind words guys :3 I am thinking of trying to write more at least when the mood strikes.

Comment by varghese e david on January 22, 2012 at 3:24am

On first poem:And you feel"what season is this in which the heart blossoms like a flower"always

in fact, both of them take us into the thought  of infinite time.They are our inner response,trust them and i have request to you that write down without any preoccupied bias.i love your  poems!!

Comment by Emily on January 21, 2012 at 11:30pm

I actually am having trouble describing how blown away I am by your writing. So lovely... and meaningful, might I add. I understand what you're saying.

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