I waltz about, run around, trip and fall, laugh and pout. But my light to see is dim, the room is as dark as my own 'heart'... abyssal. Faces show on mine and it is quite obsurd. My gift of freedom is my cage. Of all the humans born in to this world why shall I be born so odd and different in these ways... My heart would be blank and black and unknown to me had I not found my light. My light may be dim but it is so due to distance and one day it shall be as close to me as the sun is its own radiating particles... As these particles give it the heat and lit electrons that make up what it is. Without them it would have no meaning.

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Comment by The1andonlyAbber on March 1, 2014 at 7:31pm
When I'm in my daydreams, I feel free, too. However, in the real world they are holding me back. Well, it's not so much that THEY'RE holding me back, me needing them so much is what's holding me back.
Comment by mary g on January 25, 2014 at 10:45pm

My heart would be blank and black and unknown to me had I not found my light.so poetic...

how did you learn to write like this dear such amazing talent.

i know how you feel most days i feel like this too.you are not the only one whos odd and different i am too...your words echo the feelings in my heart,feelings that i wanted to put a word to but couldnt,what i wanted to express but didnt and you have written it beautifully.u live in darkness but soon u shall be close to the light.u have hopes and dreams.dont ever let go of them .cling on to them....

Comment by mirrorgirl on January 25, 2014 at 6:46pm

"My gift of freedom is my cage" Your poem is beautiful. I think it sums up how  so many on this site feel. We find freedom in our dreams but when we come out of them they have stolen precious time away from us and keep us from sooo much  in our real life. They are our cage.

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